Free time it’s for me a category that shouldn’t exist because life is a free time as long as you consider it like this. But I don’t mean you haven’t nothing to do with, on the contrary you can do all you want ,even study is something you choose, or you enjoy.
To me, go to the cinema, theater, even listen to music is as important as do the homework, or study for a test. Enjoy is something very important to me ,to discover every aspect of her, or at least to try .I couldn’t say that I love read because it’s doesn’t means very much, in fact I love some book, good readings that allow me to travel or feel deferent things. Writers I really like are Cortázar , Alejandro Dolina, Marcial Souto,Juan Luis Martines,and others.
Winter days makes me want to go out, go to see a movie, or to the theater, especially walk in the street after rain.
Your composition is interesting and contains some good ideas , especially at the beginning. I like your point of view.
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-You haven't ANYTHING
-To me, goING to the cinema, theater, even listenING to music is as important as doING YOUR homework, or studyING for a test.
-Winter days makE me want